Writing task 1, test 1, cambridge: 7
The Table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given table illustrates the data of expenditure on five various items consumed in five different countries in the year 2002.
Overall, it can be noticed that all countries have spent the highest amount on foods, drinks, and tobacco, while the lowest money paid for leisure and education.
Turning back to details, Turkey spent highest on foods, drink, and cigarettes which is 32%. However, Sweden paid the lowest in these criteria which is 15.77%. Italy and Spain spent money 16.36% and 18.80% respectively. 28.91% was paid by Sweden on the same items in 2002.
For leisure and education, Turkey paid 4.35% which was the highest percentage among the other four countries. Sweden paid the second-highest amount. Italy and Ireland’s expenditure was 3.20 %and 2.21%.In this sector, Spain (1.98%) has spent the lowest money.
All countries spent less than 10% on clothes and footwear. Italians have shown the highest desires on these criteria of 9% expenditure than others. Approximately, Turkey showed near demand of 6.63% on clothes and footwear. Ireland and Spain showed almost the same amount of 6.43% and 6.51% respectively. Meanwhile, Sweden people had the lowest desire for clothing (5.40%).
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the highest'.
Suggestion: spent the highest
...ation. Turning back to details, Turkey spent highest on foods, drink, and cigarettes which i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...eland’s expenditure was 3.20 %and 2.21%.In this sector, Spain 1.98% has spent the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30890052356 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57193324213 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0539245902 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4285714286 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739341440654 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285523847991 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707620372223 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670713028382 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103711374857 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the highest'.
Suggestion: spent the highest
...ation. Turning back to details, Turkey spent highest on foods, drink, and cigarettes which i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...eland’s expenditure was 3.20 %and 2.21%.In this sector, Spain 1.98% has spent the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30890052356 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57193324213 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0539245902 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4285714286 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739341440654 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285523847991 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707620372223 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670713028382 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103711374857 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.