The Bricks Manufacturing Process
The diagram shows how is the production scheme of bricks that are used in construction.
Overall, there are seven stages of process from digging the clay to the shipment. First and last steps are mainly depend on transportation while others giving shape of bricks inside a factory.
At the very first stage, clay is obtained from ground by the help of heavy machinery such as excavator. Then, it is transported over a roller mechanism, by the time metal grid makes clay smaller. Thereafter sand and water are combined and pass through a rectangular hole and cutted by wire or can be obtained by pouring inside a mould.
After giving shape, heating process starts. Bricks as a bunch are opposed to settle down inside drying oven between 24-48 hours. Next, bricks are heated to moderate (980C) and high temperature (1300C).After cooling process which can length 2-3 days, bricks are ready to pack as a square bunch. The final step is delivering them to constructions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ipment. First and last steps are mainly depend on transportation while others giving s...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thereafter,
...the time metal grid makes clay smaller. Thereafter sand and water are combined and pass th...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...oderate 980C and high temperature 1300C.After cooling process which can length 2-3 da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93251533742 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61518134607 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8923295157 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227687900897 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796649933582 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762214956055 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131785113174 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902063022115 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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