The pie chart illustrates the major cause of decrease in productivity agricultural land like over-grazing , over-cultivation, ,Deforestation and other reasons . Here the given table represent cause of degradation of land in different regions like North america ,Europe and Oceania during 1990s.
Relating to the given chart , The main cause of land degradation is over-grazing which is 35 % of total land degraded worldwide. After this deforestation is second major another cause . 30 % of land is degraded by deforestation worldwide which is 5 % less than by over-grazing . Thirdly another cause is over-cultivation which covers 28 % of total .It is 2 % less than that is caused due to deforestation and 7% less than caused due to over-grazing . Beside this three reasons the other various reasons covers 7 %
In table we see that , In North america there is less land degradation than other two regions that is only 5 % of total . we can see that over-cultivation is major reason and over-grazing and deforestation respectively . In this region there is less deforestation than other given region .comparetively , In Oceania there is less land degradation than Europe and and more than of North america which is 13 % of total land degraded . Here there is no any over-cultivation but there is maximum overgrazing and less deforestation . Thirdly , In Europe There is maximum land degradation that is 23% of total . We can analyze that there is more deforestation and over-cultivation problem than any other region. Beside there is also overgrazing problem.
From all above description we can easily recapitulate that over-cultivation , deforestation and over-cultivation is major cause of agricultural land degradation around the world .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 3.97073170732 554% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48496240602 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5897214211 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.37969924812 0.547539520022 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 283.868780488 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.117260459 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 1.69756097561 1885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347531890936 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153097422795 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125267003283 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252842154297 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822720051203 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.