Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?What measures do you think might be effective?

It is fact that growing pollution and traffic is serious problem in present context. Growing pollution and traffic is result of weak government policies in transportation management and lack of self awareness towards environment sanitation. so, In my opinion , There is no point in increasing the price of petrol to solve growing traffic and pollution problem. Rather , It will invite several other problems by hiking transportation cost .

Government do not have effective government policy regarding management of transportation. Due to this there is use of out dated vehicle which is major cause of pollution, Meanwhile, They are meant to be band. Lack of wider roads and provision of alternative for road transportation in considerable cost also one of major problems in increasing traffic. People lack self awareness among people is one of the problem behind pollution. Increasing in price of petrol cannot solve this problem.

There are several other solution to solve this problems like , Bringing new government policies , Banding out dated vehicles, Giving emphasize in using pollution free electric vehicles, Developing other alternative of road transport and so on . There should me development of metros , trains and making it affordable can decrease the use and number of road vehicle . This will ultimately help in decreasing traffic and pollution problems . so, This measures should be considered to solve problem of pollution and traffic.

To recapitulate , Increasing price of petrol only invites other several problems rather than solving it. So , emphasizing in use of electric vehicle and developing other alternative for roadway can be measures to solve growing pollution and traffic problems.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57088122605 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05974250901 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486590038314 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7061143491 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200977426329 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879750200877 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706676505783 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147372147952 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450685111943 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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