celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In you letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service
Write at least 150 words.
You do not need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is Nicky who usually visit your restaurant with friends and family. I am writing this letter to appreciate you about the delectable meal we had in dinner and the great service you provided on the last Saturday night.
Your restaurant is one of my favorite restaurants that I often come with my family, friends or colleagues I worked with. I love the high quality food with a reasonable price as well as the amiable people there. Last Saturday was my birthday, hence, my friends and I came to an agreement that celebrate my birthday in your restaurant. That was an excellent choice.
Firstly, I would like to thank for the delicious food you provided, those steaks and chips are the most tasty food I have ever eaten. Secondly, it's very nice of you giving me a cake as a birthday gift once you know that day is my birthday. And also, all the people there sang me a beautiful 'Happy Birthday'. I am very touched. Thank heaps for all you did for me, I believe your restaurant will become much more popular and everyone loves it. This is out of questions.
Best wishes,
Nicky
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...taurant. That was an excellent choice. Firstly, I would like to thank for the d...
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...ne loves it. This is out of questions. Best wishes, Nicky
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...s is out of questions. Best wishes, Nicky
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...t of questions. Best wishes, Nicky
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 5.60731707317 696% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53266331658 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46552963742 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6139257056 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3846153846 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275561229788 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809252777873 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546685793319 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177168278344 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209005698748 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.