You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In you lettergive details of your visit to the restaurantexplain the reason for

Essay topics: You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In you letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service

Write at least 150 words.
You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Nicky, who usually visit your restaurant called Mr&Mrs Bean. I am writing this letter to appreciate you about the wonderful meal my friends and I had in dinner and the service you offered to me on the last Saturday night.
Your restaurant is one of the restaurants which my family and I often come, all of us like the good quality food, such as sushi, steak, dessert and so forth, as well as the lovely environment there. Last Saturday was my birthday, hence, my friends and I celebrated my birthday in your restaurant.
Firstly, I would like to thank for the delicious food you offered, those steak and chips are the most tasty food I have ever eaten. Secondly, it's very nice of you gave me a cake as a birthday present when you know is my birthday. Finally, I want to thank all of the waiters and waitress there about the beautiful birthday song they sang to me, I was really touched. That's one of the best birthday i had.
Best wishes,
Nicky

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this steak' or 'those steaks'?
Suggestion: this steak; those steaks
...ank for the delicious food you offered, those steak and chips are the most tasty food I hav...
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...s my birthday. Finally, I want to thank all of the waiters and waitress there about the be...
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...tress there about the beautiful birthday song they sang to me, I was really touch...
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Suggestion: That's
... they sang to me, I was really touched. Thats one of the best birthday i had. Bes...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...touched. Thats one of the best birthday i had. Best wishes, Nicky
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... Thats one of the best birthday i had. Best wishes, Nicky
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, such as, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42222222222 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41039415864 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3509230253 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 5.23603664747 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229330161568 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818519575497 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673301505204 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159447921666 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487942496996 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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