Central heating system

Essay topics:

Central heating system

The diagram illustrates how the central heating system functions inside a home.

Overall, in an initial stage cold water comes inside a house and stored in a water tank, and in the final stage hot water gets to taps and radiator, which ultimately provides heating system facility.

Firstly, the cold water comes through pipes and gets stored inside the storage tank that is placed at the roof of the house. Next, the water is stored inside a storage tank. In order to convert water from cold to hot, water is passed through the boiler which is placed at the bottom of the house.

Afterward, there are multiple radiators attached inside the room. The pump sucks the hot water from the boiler and gets inside the radiators. Small tubes help to pass the stream of hot water that warms the rooms. When talking about how hot water gets inside taps, the same hot water that passed through the boiler gets to the taps by overflow pipes.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eating system functions inside a home. Overall, in an initial stage cold water ...
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...ely provides heating system facility. Firstly, the cold water comes through pi...
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...is placed at the bottom of the house. Afterward, there are multiple radiators ...
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...ler gets to the taps by overflow pipes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74545454545 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03148766887 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478787878788 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7412312948 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106699471693 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639532796814 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141850851441 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143894879283 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183767672071 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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