chart 1 below shows a normal price of a tablet

Essay topics:

chart 1 below shows a normal price of a tablet

The charts depict average prices, promotional discounts, sales uplifts and advertising budgets for seven stores sailing tablet computers.

Regarding computer costs, Slaker, Jones, Scots and Fraser have an average price within $299-321 each, followed by Lewis and Nova with quite high costs, comprising $460 and $565 accordingly. The only excepting is Smith having the lowest price, at only $180. A similar grouping can be seen in promotional discounts provided. For example, the 4 mid-priced stores offering 10% discount, the two higher-priced shops giving 20$ and Smith introducing only 5% sale.

Regarding outlifts in sales throughout promotions, Nova and Lewis again demonstrate the highest rates, hitting roughly 25% and 21% respectively, whereas the figures for Fraser, Scots, Jones and Slaker vary from 12% to 14% each. The rate for Smith is the lowest, making up just over 4%.

Turning to television advertising, the most striking point is that Slaker, Jones, Scots and Fraser contribute the largest amount of financial resources to advertising between $63,000 and $70,000. In the meantime, Lewis and Nova have much lower spends at $18,000 and $21,000. However, Smith does not spend any money at all.

To summary, clear correlations can be noticed between prices, promotional discounts and the amount of money devoted to commercials.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
...unt, the two higher-priced shops giving 20$ and Smith introducing only 5% sale. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46859903382 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74244702039 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676328502415 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2612928179 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.909090909 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831781205336 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296402840561 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430750638822 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427494631443 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052726058493 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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