The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pie chart and line graph gives information about the percentage of Coca-Cola sales in five different regions of the world in the year 2000 and the amount of share prices of the company between 1996 and 2001.
Overall, it is clear that the pie chart and line graph reveals that the total number of 17.1 billion unit case of coca cola sold in the world and despite some fluctuations, general the share price of Coca-Cola company dramatically increased nearly twofold throughout the given period.
The highest sales could be observed in North america with around 30 percent of the total, and it is twice more than there was in Asia with 16,4 percent. In contrast the lowest sale recorded in Africa and Middle east with 7 percent of the total. Finally, the sales proportion in Latin america was more at 5 percent compared with Europe with one-fifth of the total.
To be more specific, the figure of share started at roughly $35 in the first year 1996 and grew considerably to nearly 70 dollars. Then there was a significant dropped in the mid of 1997 and 1998. After it had reached a peak of almost $80 in 1998, the prices dipped considerably from 1998 to 2001 and finishing the period at $55.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: contrast,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6338028169 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42095155137 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568075117371 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3849179857 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.375 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172196403072 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692718844199 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906927788352 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122277381794 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103660310121 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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