The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given pie-chart illustrates the information about the products sold by Coca-Cola in 5 particular regions in year 2000 and the line graph represent the cost of Coca-Cola’s share from 1996 to 2001. The data is calibrated in percentage and dollars.
Overall, it is clearly seen that Coca-Cola sold more than half of their total bottles in American region but lowest sale was observed in Africa and Middle East and its share price fluctuated throughout the given period but finished higher than initial cost.
It is crystal clear from circular graph that North Americans consumed almost one-third of 17.1 billion bottles sold by Coca-Cola in year 2000 followed by Latin America where a quarter was used. In Europe Coca-Cola was successful in selling fifth proportion of total units sold. In Asia the bottles traded by Coca-Cola was just 16% of total and in case of Africa and Middle East 7% units were purchased by residents.
Shifting towards line graph, the share price of Coca-Cola was 35$ in 1996 which increased dramatically and became almost double in year 1997. After showing minor decline the cost of Coca-Cola’s share was on peak in 1998 which was 80$ then its share price shown up and down variations in next 3 years and ended at 45$ in 2001.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 63, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35'.
Suggestion: $35
...graph, the share price of Coca-Cola was 35$ in 1996 which increased dramatically an...
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Line 13, column 236, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
...s;s share was on peak in 1998 which was 80$ then its share price shown up and down ...
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Line 13, column 319, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$45'.
Suggestion: $45
...variations in next 3 years and ended at 45$ in 2001.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98598130841 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64867133965 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5019684734 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.375 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199387795712 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091119145529 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631255735685 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132611809182 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508753751014 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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