The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph illustrates information about the share price of Coca-Cola, between 1996 and 2001 and the chart shows data about the sales of the soft drink in five continents in the year 2000.
Overall, In the year 2000, North America contributed to the highest number of Coca-Cola sales. Middle-East and Africa are the places where the sales are minimum. On the other hand, there was an upward trend in the share price of the soft drink during the initial period, followed by a decline and fluctuations in the end.
In the year 2000, when sales of Coca-Cola are low, North-America contributed to the highest percentage with 30.4% of global consumption. It was followed by Latin America and Europe with 25.7% and 20.5% respectively. Consumption of the soft drink is quite better in Asia compared to Africa and Middle-East with 16.4%. Finally, with only 7% of global usage Africa and Middle-East stands last in the sales.
Regarding the share price of the company, it started around 40$ in the year 1996, after that the price increased rapidly till mid 1997, reaching a value of just under 70. At this point, the share declined significantly, reaching approximately 60$. Following this, it went-up considerably to a value of around 80$ in 1998, which is the peak value of the share in the given period. Next, the share price declined steadily to under 50$ by 2000. Finally, the share price fluctuated and reached 55$ by the end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 61, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$40'.
Suggestion: $40
...price of the company, it started around 40$ in the year 1996, after that the price ...
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Line 13, column 244, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...d significantly, reaching approximately 60$. Following this, it went-up considerabl...
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Line 13, column 310, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
...nt-up considerably to a value of around 80$ in 1998, which is the peak value of the...
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Line 13, column 430, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
... share price declined steadily to under 50$ by 2000. Finally, the share price fluct...
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Line 13, column 491, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$55'.
Suggestion: $55
... the share price fluctuated and reached 55$ by the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65405753815 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7419357106 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170686685212 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606680646963 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706828618718 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125753370651 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947645262086 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.