Some people think that children should attend extra classes outside the school others say that they should be allowed some time to play . discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the present world, many parents want their children to excel in any other activity like dancing or painting etc, apart from the school curriculum. People think these activities manage kids time efficiently, but what is the effective way for the children to spend their time after the school? Some believe that kids should be allowed to play, instead of attending any extra classes. I completely agree with this point and in this essay, I will support my opinions with examples.
Firstly, after attending many classes in the school, children often get stressed out. For example, normal schools in India starts at 9 A.M in the morning and ends at 5 P.M in the evening, kids are only left with 3 hours, before getting to sleep. Moreover, they usually have homeworks to be done for next day classes. In addition to this, leaving alone kids play in the evenings, increases their metabolism and health. What I mean by this is that, pupils are happy when they interact with their friends in the park. Finally, if parents encourage their children to play, they have a chance to learn and develop many skills on their own. pupils who find themselves happy contribute more to daily activities.
Turning on the other side of argument, Many parents have busy schedules through out the day which makes their children join these extra classes. They also think that their minors misbehave, in absence of their presence. Furthermore, it is true that youngsters play dangerously, when they know that there is no one to ask them. Additionally, many believe that attending or following any other activity apart from studies make their minors participate in external events. Also, many youngsters don't listen to their parents, this lack of discipline towards elders make people look for extra classes.
To sum up, although it is evident that minors learn something from additional classes, it is very good to leave them play with friends. Elders need to manage their time for pupils, as they can also choose these activities during weekends or holidays. Personally, I believe that leaving kids play, help them maintain good health and social awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, for example, i mean, in addition, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03361344538 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45792214246 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6996154858 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5789473684 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208764648943 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678194943443 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706329408675 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133407715724 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791889096933 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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