Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, the increasing industries, traffic congestions and the waste created by humans are causing serious threats to the health of humankind, due to which people are in search of the measures to improve their health. One of the ways to improve the health is physical fitness by increasing sporting facilities. However, this is not only the way to improve health, there are other measures like yoga and meditation which should also be taken into account.
Firstly, one of the primary reason for decline in the health is pollution, with the close proximity of industries to living spaces, many humans inhale all the bad gases released from the companies. For example, living close to the nuclear power plant may cause issues related to radiation. Additionally, in many developing nations due to no strict laws on smoking, people often smoke in public places which can cause heart related issues to the people who inhale it. Moreover, traffic congestion and smoke released by the vehicles can also result in the damage of health. For instance, in China as a consequence of the mix of fog and harmful gases released by vehicles many people have suffered breathing issues. Hence, the governments should bring some solutions like banning vehicles which produce more gas and shifting industries to the locations where there is no human or animal population.
Secondly, yoga and meditation can also help people to live without any mental stress. It is proved that a thirty minute yoga session can improve blood flow to the brain and helps in fighting with external organisms that enter the body. Furthermore, it is important for mankind to have regular medical check-ups, which can help them know the medical problems well before. Finally, sporting activities should be included into daily routines, which can help people stay fit. Adults who work for long working hours, often need physical fitness, hence many knock the gym doors doors and sporting academies for relaxation.
To sum up, although sporting facilities help the mankind to stay fit, but the impact is very minimum. Mankind should understand the side-effects of pollution, congestion on their health. In my opinion, I think that regular fitness activities along with proper medical checkups and reduced pollution in the human surroundings can help mankind stay healthy.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20634920635 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57299579911 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1589038158 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183313228038 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647617308905 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724667174042 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121967706336 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110101772281 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.