stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. what do you think are the causes of this?
what solutions can you suggest?
These days, competition is involved in all major aspects of life from education to career prospects, which are also the prime causes of high working hours. Due to which there are many health issues like stress. Moreover, financial struggles are also major concerns for this illness. But what are solutions to tackle these issues? In this essay I will discuss some causes of the issue and propose solutions.
Firstly, employees of an organisation work competitively for the success, they often want to achieve high roles with an increased hike in their field. As a result of this, many people work for long hours, adding additional burden to their mind. Secondly, workers usually have to complete the assigned work on time. Furthermore, crossing deadlines can result in huge pressure from higher management and colleagues. For example, many software organizations relate employees work with wages, making work complicated. The solution is for the employment organizations to monitor mental stress of people frequently and allowing the workers to spend more time with family. Additionally, government's should implement flexible pay options by not relating it to work.
Another reason for this illness is hectic study hours in the schools, most of the schools do not allow their students to play, as their sports hours are replaced with study plans. Generally, different children learn things at different level, but teachers teach with the same pace to the complete class. Hence, with the approaching exam dates, students develop fear in their mind resulting in fatigue. Parents should allow their children to play with friends. In addition to this school's should understand the capabilities of students by encouraging them with extra help.
Lastly, Financial issues are also serious issues of mental fatigue. Many people due to low wages and high spendings often lend money from different sources and feel burdened to repay. This causes families to adjust on the limited resources along with growing tension in the mind. Governments should introduce schemes for poor people like no interest loans and subsidized food materials.
To sum up, many people, despite having money and fame, they develop tensions due to health and family problems. However, career and finances are major reasons for mental stress. In my opinion, everyone in the world has some kind of problem, they should overcome these problems by daily exercises and meditation apart from this family support is also key in difficult situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34924623116 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58997456225 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58040201005 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2008494452 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7083333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111083613664 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338953011848 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382261521042 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592839958461 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353920743964 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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