In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, eating fast foods and using mobile and computers is becoming increasingly popular among youth. Even parents are providing their children with these modern gadgets.Many people feel that the eating habits and the way of living got changed from the past generation damaging health of kids. I completely agree with the point and in this essay I will discuss my opinion with relevant examples.
Firstly, fast foods had become daily routine for youngsters. For example, children like to have fried items and burgers compared to vegetables and salads. They often skip the meal if they don't find any of these, due to which parents are forced to buy these items. These eatables which have high fat contents causes obesity and high blood pressure. Additionally, modern kids have very bad sleeping hours. These bad sleeping patterns can cause mental stress and pressure for kid's. Definitely healthy food habits from past generation has changed drastically leaving new diseases.
Secondly, computer and mobile phones are the reason why youth is not spending much time playing outdoors with friends. These virtual games take children's interest completely towards them, they often reward players with prizes and arrange competitions among other players leaving kids choose them upon outdoor activities. These kind of addiction can generate early eye sight and headache problems. In addition to this, children watch more television shows instead of reading books. Watching cartoons and other programs have a direct impact on child's imagination and creativity in a negative manner. Finally, they left meeting friends outside social media, due to which they don't know what is going around them.
In conclusion, bad food habits and excessive use of electronic gadgets have very bad consequences on children. There can be serious health issues and decline in physical fitness.I think parents should not encourage their pupils having foods from KFC or MC Donalds and they should monitor the usage of mobile and computer for gaming and instead allowing them to meet friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35866261398 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39162024109 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647416413374 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6973142279 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.15 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118215366206 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358514091901 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039991867951 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696339737376 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440675010222 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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