Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the present world, with the advancement of technology online shopping is becoming more popular. The Internet offers a wide range of services from shopping, food ordering, and books etc. Websites like Amazon and Bookingcom provide great deals to attract customers. However, there are both pros and cons of shopping online. In this essay, I will discuss some positives of shopping online and challenges to be overcome.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of online shopping. Firstly, customers can shop from home. What I mean by this is that, instead of going out to shop, these websites offer images of the product and allows people to select any item making their life easy. For example, Flipkart an Indian based online giant helps people with a variety of products to choose. Moreover, this model of shopping saves time for busy people, allowing them to shop while they travel or eat.
Secondly, There are great deals available online, compared to shops. People have an option to choose a product from two different websites without hassle for comparison, they also offer huge discounts throughout the year. For instance, people search for air tickets from different online areas and choose the one with great profit. Additionally, stores like Big Basket offer fresh fruit and vegetable delivery services, reducing the customer's burden to hand-pick them from an outside store.
Turning on to the other side of the argument, sometimes products can be cheap or not-value for money like bad quality material used for clothing or selling frozen products. This has made many consumers leave internet for buying things, and also while ordering heavy products like Television sets or Washing machines there can be rough delivery issues sometimes. Furthermore, Credit fraud is a major concern for online shoppers, there are many fraud transactions going round the internet, like phishing webpages and replacing the payment page with the wrong web page. Additionally, there are many cases of utilizing customer's data like phone numbers for wrong purposes. Finally, false advertisements attract people for buying fake or expired products, making the way for traditional shopping.
In conclusion, although internet scams, shopping online will be very enjoyable and satisfying because it allows people to hand-pick products from interested quantities and qualities. People should weigh the positives like saving money, home shopping, and so on and the negatives like online fraud before choosing the better shopping option. Personally, I believe that benefit in the form of comparing products from different websites outweighs all other disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43855421687 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59893788952 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587951807229 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6181600783 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.590909091 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128275499679 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411136230811 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461241183651 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774445957908 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047028842158 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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