The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, with the advancement in the fields of science and medicine, modern humans have done many innovative things. Treatments for most of the dangerous diseases have been discovered. For example, from the start of the 20th century about 95% of the total population is free from malaria. However, many people argue that human health may get degraded in the future. This is true to some extent and this essay I provide some details on this.
Firstly, most of the modern health issues are related to the technological advancements in the last decade. What I mean by this is that with the rapid growth of industrial sector and traffic congestions, many harmful gases are being released into the atmosphere resulting in diseases that are unknown to the humans in the last century. For example, In the history, people have faced many deadly disease outbreaks, which took some time to get tackled. In this way, in the future people can create some health issues due to rapid urbanization.
In addition to this, change in the food habits, can also be the reason for a decrease in the standard of human health. It means that people nowadays, are interested in having fast food meals in their daily routines, which can result in health issues related to obesity and heart attacks. For Instance, the obesity rates have grown since the early 20th century and they are likely to be continued in the future. Furthermore, the modern world has experienced a remarkable migration of people to different corners of the world. This can result in transportation of diseases which are unknown to a particular region and can result in the outbreak as they have no immune power to those health issues.
Turning on the other side of the argument, due to the modern improvements in the medical field, there is a huge chance of predicting a disorder well before its existence, like predicting the heart attack by analysing heartbeat. So, there is a huge probability of humans discovering all the medical issues during the child birth and taking effective measures to reduce them. Nonetheless, it is very difficult to control pollution and food related issues as they should be controlled by both humans and governments.
To sum up, although current medical society is very innovative and advanced, there are many areas which are unknown and undiscovered. Though there are high chances of medical improvement in the future, it is our responsibility to keep our body clean. In conclusion, there are high chances of decline in health in the future due to unknown disorders and harmful pollutants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efore its existence, like predicting the heart attack by analysing heartbeat. So,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00231481481 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70363929242 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497685185185 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5893179095 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.05 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151401828639 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484719385422 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384499306089 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081588646964 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480443315277 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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