The bar chart illustrates the number of beds available for patients in 8 selected nations, and the table compares the government health expenses and life expectancy in three of those countries.
According to the information, Japan seems the nation with largest healthcare resources. Precisely, it provided 14 hospital beds per thousand of its total population, followed by Germany with 8 and the other six with around 4 beds. While the lowest expenses on medical services, compared to Netherlands and US, was recorded at $2,581 in Japan, its average life expectancy was up to 83 years, the highest in the three countries.
Meanwhile, the healthcare spending per person of USA was $6,719, almost doubled the figure for Netherlands, the second largest amount. The former offered the smallest number of beds for patients, while the latter ranked the third position in the list. American residents lived until they are 78 in average, compared to more than 2 years in the figure for the Dutch.
Overall, Japan was the best nation for medical resources and its people had the most longevity; in addition, despite lowest supply of hospital beds for patients, US spent the highest expenses on residents' healthcare.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the largest'.
Suggestion: with the largest
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'despite the lowest'.
Suggestion: despite the lowest
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...ients, US spent the highest expenses on residents healthcare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15306122449 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71340326303 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1972221329 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951721524161 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410836721085 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471001927176 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648239608731 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516494834688 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.