The first pie chart illustrates the discrepant choices of graduates after accomplishing their nursing studies in America in 2009, while the second table demonstrates the proportions of people working in different positions in medical service registered concurrently.
Overall, a majority of graduated individuals chose to work in healthcare service. In addition, occupying as a hospital nurse is the most popular choice of nursing graduates in contrast to being a mental nurse.
In particular, about 84% of students who completed nursing courses opted for contributing to the medical sector. While the number of people choosing to continue further study accounted for 8% of the total figure, which was almost two times higher than that of jobless people (4%). Meanwhile, the figures for people preferring other options and working and studying at the same time were equal at approximately 2%.
Regarding the percentages of graduates undertaking distinct roles in the healthcare sector, of five jobs, hospital nurses constituted the largest proportion at around 72,9% compared to only 0,4% and 1,3% in mental nurse and paramedic, respectively. Additionally, the proportions of people choosing midwives and community nurses were relatively the same at around 11%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, while, in addition, in contrast, in particular, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66492146597 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03943724692 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3166059329 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175816874059 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748072357861 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065056348989 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112023952516 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590004912845 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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