Many people argue that spectating live events bring more pleasure to the audience than watching the corresponding televised productions. While there are some benefits to joining live events, I maintain that each type of viewing experience has its merits.
On the one hand, the option to watch performances on the spot is appealing for several reasons. The first reason is that the opportunity to attend a show in person offer participants a feeling of togetherness. This could be explained by the fact that being surrounded by a large pool of people and the energetic atmosphere of the stage could actually lift their spirits, thus they can enjoy the performance better. Moreover, these real-life events could give attendees a precious chance to meet their idols in flesh. For many people, interacting with their admired celebrities is a much more surreal experience, which will remain vivid in their minds for years.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why some individuals choose to watch live performances on television broadcasts. The two main reasons are that watching live events at home would be more economical and more comfortable. This is because viewers do not have to pay for exorbitantly expensive entrance tickets, let online transportation and accommodation costs for going to overseas live performances. For example, in Viet Nam, football supporters who do not have an adequate financial budget to afford the traveling expenses to visit broad stadiums can opt for watching these broadcasting events on tv channels which is much more cost-efficient. In addition, when viewing these live performances at home, they do not need to struggle to find a nice seat with the best vision in an unpleasant setting that is full of people. In other words, the viewing experience will be ameliorated when watching live events on tv programs.
In conclusion, while going to auditoriums will give the spectators a sense of accompaniment and personal interaction with their favorite celebrities, the reasonable price and comforts broadcast programs offer home audiences are also greatly beneficial. In my opinion, I believe that both these watching approaches are amusing in their own ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... watching live events on tv programs. In conclusion, while going to auditoriums ...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... audiences are also greatly beneficial. In my opinion, I believe that both these w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26628895184 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99953317022 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57790368272 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5922474796 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.933333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26503135543 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922790532041 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068834679021 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151419453084 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792286223988 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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