The chart below gives information about adults with education at high school level in six countries in 2010

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The chart below gives information about adults with education at high school level in six countries in 2010.

The column chart provided below describes data about adults with high school level education in six different countries in the year 2010. The six countries are Germany, USA, Russia, South Korea, Brazil, and China. The data is calibrated in percentage.

It is clear that the graph contains the information for two different age groups one is for adult age 55 to 64 years, and another is for the adults aged 25 to 34 years. In case of Germany, about 72% age of 55-64 year olds, and as many as 78% of 25-34-year-olds had high-school education. For the USA, 80% of 55-64 year-olds, and about 88% of 25-34 year olds were high school graduates. In case of Russia, only 70% of 55-64 year-olds, and as high as 91% of 25-34 year-olds had at least high school level education. In the case of Russia, the gap between the two age-group groups was surprising. Only 42% of 55-64 year-olds, and as many as 98% of 25-34 year-olds had high school level graduation.

The graph also shows surprising data for the countries Brazil and China. Both of the countries had the lowest percentage of adults with high school level education. In the case of China, as low as 10% of 55-64 year-olds, and only 20% of 25-34 year-olds head high school level education.

In conclusion, South Korea had highest percentage of 25 to 34 year-olds with education at high school, whereas the USA had highest percentage of 55-64 year-olds with high school level education. Moreover, China had the lowest percentage of 55-64 year-olds, as well as 25 to 34 year old with high school level education.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Suggestion: had the highest
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Suggestion: had the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, at least, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75735294118 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6371444233 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.397058823529 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1042562535 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294118869225 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14111993067 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144238639615 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251221168648 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119635108202 0.0819641961636 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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