The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006

Essay topics:

The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

The bar chart illustrates how old the Australian women were when they gave birth to their first offspring in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
Overall, there was a dramatic decrease in the percentage of women giving birth to their first child when they were under 24, while the figures for women who were over 25 years old witnessed a significant increase. In addition, over 40-year-old females consistently had the lowest proportion of women giving birth to their first child.
About over 60% of Australian women, who were 19 to 24 years old, gave birth to their baby in 1966, with a subsequent decline to roughly 37% in 1986 and a final drop to shy of 30% at the end of the period. The figure for under 19-year-old females saw a similar change, but to a lesser extent, which started at around 33%, after which it experienced a reduction to precisely 20% in 1986 before ending the period at just over 10%.
The percentages of women who were 25 to 30 years old and 30 to 34 years old when they gave birth to their child were at about 35% and 12%, followed by dramatic increases before ending the period at roughly 38% and 45% respectively. Similarly, the figures for 34 to 39-year-old and over 40-year-old women started at just under 10% and around 3%, reaching its peak at 30% and 7% in that order.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54077253219 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51365150402 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49356223176 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4696770577 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.142857143 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285990920431 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184136569139 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13281829039 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240428862881 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133080464287 0.0819641961636 162% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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