The chart below gives information on the percentage of
British people giving money to charity by age range for the
years 1990 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the
main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrate the typical monthly degrees and the normal number of houres of mean solar day for each year in London, New york and Sydney.
Firstly, Sydney had the highest number of houres of sunshine almost 26 while London nearly 8,New york approximately 4.In January in the next three month New york and London gradually increased to reach 12 hours respectively. However Sydney slightly declined in the first three month from to 26 houres nearly to 22 houres. Morover New york sharply increased until July and it is expected to dramatically decreased in the future to just under five houres. With regaerd to London in showed fluctuations and it is moderate ig‘creased to 23 houres. Finally Sydney significantly increased in June until December.
Overall, it is significantly to note that the avarage number of houres mean solar day for each year and above are estimated to increase in all three countries with Sydney being the highest and New york the lowest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ondon, New york and Sydney. Firstly, Sydney had the highest number of houres ...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ondon nearly 8,New york approximately 4.In January in the next three month New yor...
^^
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...creased to reach 12 hours respectively. However Sydney slightly declined in the first t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ey slightly declined in the first three month from to 26 houres nearly to 22 houres. ...
^^^^^
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...it is moderate ig‘creased to 23 houres. Finally Sydney significantly increased in June ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01840490798 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64789142384 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.461610965 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0230486650109 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0118072158305 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0187360093519 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0275501702711 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196307844877 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.