In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is threfore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Most of people in the world like eating the fast food. Because fast food cooks quickly and is very delicious and digest. But, fast food damages the health of people. Therefore, the people should stop to eat fast food. Instead of, the people should eat a lot of natural products to be useful for health them. But the people are eating fast food indifferent. Although, this situation continue, do the government increases fast food tax?
Firstly, if the fast food tax is increased highly, the people buy it less. For instance, hamburger costs two dollar. One kilogramm of cucumber from vegetables costs one and a half dollar. If the government rises the price of the hamburger by 50 percent, it costs 3 dollar. For his money we can get 2 kilogramm of cucumbers. Cucumber product is richer in vitamins than hamburger. In this case, we borh benefit and take care of our health.
Secondly, natural products should decrease it price. Admittedly, nowadays natural products prices are very high. So most of people buy a lot of fast foods. When the government decrease natural products tax, only then can people consume less fast food.
Finally, fast foods injure people's health when they use up it too much. Because fast foods are high in calories and can be harmful to human health. An example of this is obesity, which is a common disease that affecta people today.
To sum up, I totally agree with that which the government increases fast food cost. There is no denying that people today are obsessed with eating fast food today. Therefore, the government should sharply go up the price of fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79710144928 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3859183966 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.6159974065 49.4020404114 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.1666666667 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36288169635 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121500102689 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863018561388 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217745559296 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888098631695 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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