The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990 2000 and 2010

Essay topics:

The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.

The given pie charts depict data on the changes in the number of degrees granted in 4 different fields of study (Law, Medicine, Business and Computer Science) at the National University in 1990, 2000 and 2010.

Overall, it is clear that initially most degrees were granted in Computer Science and Business, whereas Law accounted for the lowest number of awarded degrees. Subsequently, Computer Science remained the most preferred field, as opposed to Business, which decreased in popularity. Law continuted showing the lowest figure in 2000 and 2010.

According to the pie charts, in 1990 30% of the degrees were awarded in Computer Science, and following that the figure increased to 40% and 45% in 2000 and 2010 respectively. Conversely, the number of degrees awarded in Business showed a downward trend: the figure was at 30% in 1990, it decreased by 10% in 2000 and there was a 5% decline in 2010.

With regard to the remaining fields of study, 25% of the degrees were granted to medical students in both 1990 and 2010, while in the same years 15% were awarded to Law students. In 2000 the figure for degrees granted in Medicine rose by 5% and the one for degrees awarded in Law dropped by 5%.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (51 votes)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'if', 'whereas', 'while', 'with regard to']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270833333333 0.268076937826 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.129166666667 0.116061578633 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0458333333333 0.0759168565197 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0208333333333 0.0366838410393 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00833333333333 0.0131127313244 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1625 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0583333333333 0.0379272487307 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5626459814 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.0210936926555 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0948980150116 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00416666666667 0.00967000014798 43% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1201.0 1161.00487805 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.9 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80193236715 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381642512077 0.337110787985 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294685990338 0.247514529752 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164251207729 0.171178102325 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0966183574879 0.112407865282 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5626459814 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.1634824387 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 25.875 23.0094962315 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4815621915 42.9750493124 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.125 135.714022679 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 23.0094962315 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 55.3435990338 47.7609492067 116% => OK
Elegance: 3.10526315789 2.94281807926 106% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.601306716998 0.418131533498 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.208596070421 0.181151798455 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0869844557008 0.0850326197045 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.756526227481 0.706616315825 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155885810092 0.157042692854 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.360050263538 0.228904883108 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133983270236 0.108899403657 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.518416223116 0.367819155151 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0533612852168 0.0812612215331 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.473433151537 0.316326947829 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105859984443 0.0921553760075 115% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.