If a person is given a choice between life without work and working a lot, he would prefer to have a life without work. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that some people would opt for a life without work instead of working intensively, in case they had to choose between the two. In my opinion, although I think that a life without work appears an appealing idea, it can satisfy the human being only for a certain period.
First of all, it is commonly known that a person spends virtually a lifetime at work. He or she works countless hours in order to earn a salary high enough so that they can afford to pay for the living expenses, the essential needs and other things that bring joy in their lives. Therefore, a person is dependent on money for most of their lives. If one stops working, he or she is likely to run out of financial resources in a couple of months, and following that their state of mind might be significantly affected.
Furthermore, many people want to succeed in something and, consequently, to be involved in various activities on a regular basis. They partly enjoy receiving laborious tasks because they are keen on getting promoted to a highly-regarded and better-paid position. In their endeavour to become successful, people have to benefit from an environment where they have the opportunity to show and enrich their knowledge, their skills and abilities. In other words, they seek reassurance that their work is deemed valuable and is going to bring the success they aim for. Plus, a job is likely to instill a sense of competition into an employee's mindset. Bearing all these in mind, it is clear that working contributes considerably to the matter in question.
To conclude, I strongly believe that taking into account both the advantages and drawbacks of working, it is worth spending a great part of the life at work, rather than staying jobless. I think that people would be overall more content with a life including an amount of time dedicated to working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
... instill a sense of competition into an employees mindset. Bearing all these in mind, it ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'i think', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.186440677966 0.247107183377 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.189265536723 0.155533422707 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0734463276836 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480225988701 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0762711864407 0.0437548338989 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.149717514124 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0677966101695 0.0403226058552 168% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7451122295 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0423728813559 0.0326793684256 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0819209039548 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0141242937853 0.021408717616 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00282485875706 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1864.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80685358255 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336448598131 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246105919003 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168224299065 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121495327103 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7451122295 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 67.0037845906 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9285714286 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5425818056 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 127.492653851 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.5391633289 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.28828828829 1.69124875643 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253444001187 0.332605444948 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100566046848 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0482369462586 0.0668466124924 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558861835907 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140247785289 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104510704979 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527590082646 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.301385947177 0.324371583561 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0706632847651 0.0638462369009 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179435702605 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383696554801 0.058150111329 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.