The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts illustrate the amount of water employed in different purposes.

Overall, the largest amount of the vital liquid used in agricultural sector in almost every continents. While the lowest percentage of used correspond to domestic used especially in Africa and Asia.

In the one hand, an enormous volume of water is utilised by industry sector being Europe the greatest consumer, more than 50%, following by North America which applied 48% of it in the same group. Although, in central Asia, South East Asia, South America and Africa used only between 5 to 12 percent in industrial companies.

In the other hand, to support crops the use of H2O is even more in most of those areas, Central Asia pie shown the higher percentage, 88%, and a bit less in Africa, South East Asia and South America. Nevertheless, in Europe and North America it is better applied, therefore, just 32% and 39% respectively.

Finally, a minimal percent of that transparent liquid employed in diary used at home in the Asian and African continents as little as 7%. But, in America and Europe are using between 13 to 19 percent.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63173157452 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5582655021 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127455797654 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627580019758 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574910870492 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883211310479 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059539866681 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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