Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?
The newspaper shown that museums have been one of the most important tourist cultural attraction in those last years which is supported by ticket payment despite a few of them are subsidised by state and often it is not enough to manage it. In my point of view people must pay admission for several reasons, although should be according to age and job of whom visit it.
Firstly, a fair entrance fee is an excellent means of income either to a country or a museum that money can use to cover maintenance cost, pay exhibitions expenses and uncountable improvement to attract more visitors from all over the world and the government can keep the remaining money.
As an example The Historic Museum in Paraguay about ten years ago did not charge entry ticket and it was not a good attraction due to artefact not highly representative, therefore, the manage department decided that only children and student going to have free pass and since then it has been growing at a dramatic rate.
Secondly, putting price to access in this entertainment they can be avoided bad behaviour person whom comes in just to create problems which happened in The Mythology Museum last month, they offer free ticket for everyone Monday to Thursday and one of those days a person wrote his name on an invaluable cultural asset, then he was caught saying to his friends that it was just for fun and he went there because it was free.
Finally, through this step citizens and government could appreciate museums more than when it is totally complimentary because it would provide monetary resources to the country.
To conclude, definitely paid access is far more beneficial than completely open access; moreover those institutions can capitalize on the money received and achieve greatest advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69282173359 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2958865598 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 213.428571429 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8571428571 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155447328403 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617820360009 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409949023883 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634945848307 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403970935744 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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