The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar graph illustrates, the information of free time in a week for different employment categories such as, fulltime and part-time workers, unemployed, housewives, and retired persons in either genders between 1998 and 1999.
Overall, unemployed and retired personal has enjoying most significant leisure time in a week over the period given. While, female fulltime workers account for least amount of extra time. Generally speaking, males makes up leisure time relatively more than females.
Initially, unemployed and retired males has the highest amount of free time in a week as compared to female such as, approximately 83 hours and about 79 hours respectively. Similarly, the average amount of free time for fulltime employed males has near 43 hours in a week which is just over 5 hours than females with 38 hours during the period given.
Regarding part time employed females has enjoyment in extra time was lesser than housewives. As is observed, housewives found time for enjoyment in a week with 50 hours, while, part time employed females has mere 40 hours in week. Moreover, part time employed males not mentioned in the figure over the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...s during the period given. Regarding part time employed females has enjoyment in extra...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...njoyment in a week with 50 hours, while, part time employed females has mere 40 h...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...oyment in a week with 50 hours, while, part time employed females has mere 40 hours in w...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...es has mere 40 hours in week. Moreover, part time employed males not mentioned in the fig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21276595745 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7091548765 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6851818676 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190042042609 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995924340173 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300813612026 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134850537256 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327320793081 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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