The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Leisure time in a typical week in hour- by sex and employment status, 1998-99.
The bar chart provides the number of free time spent by male and female of employed (part and full-time), unemployed, retired and housewives status between 1998 -99. The units measured in a typical week in hour
Overall, men did not entertain their leisure time by in a part-time job and as a role of housewives. However, they are at the top of the remaining employment status apart from part-time employed and housewives. For both sexes, they spent an equal amount of time in unemployed and retired status.
On the one hand, the most number of free time enjoyed by men, when they are unemployed and after retirement with almost same around 85 hours in a week where female also entertained with just under 80% in both category. If you looked at the full-time employed, both men and women spent less time when compared with other employment status. Men enjoyed free time just above 40 hours and women just below 40 hours in a week in a full-time job.
On the other hand, male employee did not take part in part-time and housewives status as it might they never enjoyed time itself in that status. While women are in lead in part-time job and housewives role with 40 hours and 50 hours in a week accordingly because there is no competition was there.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, look, so, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68468468468 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47793607549 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8782976399 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378286373474 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182377166817 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480817029348 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24670868177 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368066525117 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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