The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The chart illustrates the amount of consumption and the production of power in 2014 of the top ten nations. Units are measured in Billion kWh.
Overall, it can be seen that the production and consumption of electricity are highest in China and followed by the United States where the least one will be the Korea Republic. Germany has more consumption than production when compared to other nations.
On the one hand, the amount of production and consumption of electricity in China is 5398 and 5322 billion kWh(bkWh) respectively, and it is followed by the United States 4099 bkWh and 3866 bkWh. Russia( 1057 and 1038 bkWh), Japan(936.2 and 856.7 bkWh) and India(871 and 698.8 bkWh) are in 3, 4 and 5 rank.
On the other hand, Cannada, France, and Brazil are in 6, 7 and 8 positions in the production and consumption of electricity where Germany is the only country the consumption of power (582 bkWh) is more than production(bkWh). The least one is Korea Republic( production is 485.1 bkWh and consumption is 449.5 bkWh).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Billion'.
Suggestion: A Billion
... top ten nations. Units are measured in Billion kWh. Overall, it can be seen that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8734619666 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474285714286 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4722996476 43.030603864 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.2 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246470808676 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166720328107 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114059133384 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174981863353 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856992846212 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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