Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is thought by some, that to stop the change of climate that we have to find a solution to live with in climate change. This essay strongly disagrees that find a way to live in the climate changes but not to prevent those changes. Firstly, this essay will discuss about the environment and policies to regulate climate change and secondly how it will affect living beings.
On the one hand, one of the responsibilities of people and the government to protect the environment not to find a solution to live in with that changes. The government has to implement laws that hegihten the penalties for the people who abuse the environment.h However, it needs the cooperation from the citizen inoder to implement the different emvironment policies. Pollutiion is the main reason for the climate changes by the industrious gas out to the autmosphere and vehicle pollution and it will effect to the ozen layer in the climate. For instance, the Department of Environment and natural resources in Delhi in 2018 reported that in the winter season entire Delhi covered with fog during the day because of climate changes by pollution.
On the other hand, if we didn't find a solution to prevent climate changes. This will be the reason to death of many people in future days. If we try to find a solution to live within that changes and it is impossible at all beacuse our body need pure oxygen for that we need trees, People are cutting down the trees and it will affect both people and climate as well. we cannot live without preventing the climate changes and we cannot any alternate way to live also, so we have to give preference to save our world for the future generation. For example, In 2017 University relased a report regarding to prevention of environment.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that without the prevention of climate change, we cannot find an alternate solution to live. This is a difficult battle as it needs the cooperation of both people and the government in order to help to protect the environment.
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...resources in Delhi in 2018 reported that in the winter season entire Delhi covere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84045584046 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72919900401 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5504278282 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288560428776 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113589825468 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062125281765 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189932255635 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414386040545 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.