The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event.
The table illustrates the number of grades for the fundraising activity and the pie chart shows the percentage of the total money raised by grade level.
Overall, it can be observed that the grade 1 is the dance contest has the highest percentage and the lowest one is grade 3 is a book sale.
On the one hand, top three money increasing activity is the dance contest is at grade 1 and it had the highest fundraising with 23.7% and followed by cake decorating (grade 2) contest and cookie sale (grade 5) with the percentage of 20.9 and 18.3 respectively.
On the other hand, soccer skill (grade 6)contest is at the fourth place of fundraising activity with the percentage of 15.5 and the last two grade are art sale and the book sale. Art sale (grade 4) is at the last but one position with 13.9% where book sale (grade 3) is in the last position with only 7.8%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45911949686 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42623870038 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2719790151 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140937942954 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100991761286 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700682218371 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112377419408 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072424958222 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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