The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Leisure time in a typical week in hour- by sex and employment status, 1998-99.
The bar chart provides the information about the number of free time in a typical week in hour by sex(male and female) and employment status between 1998 to 1999.
Overall, the both male and female employment had same amount trend in unemployed and retired. There is no trend in the graph for male in part-time employed and housewives. Male experienced an upward trend in full-time employed, unemployed and retired where female showed a downward trend.
On the one hand, in the full-time employed male ( around 43 hour) had upper hand than female (almost 37 hour) with more than around 5 hour. Men had same number of trend in unemployed and retired with almost 83 hours in a week. Female employment had same numbers with around 7 hours in a week.
On the other hand, in the part-time employed female had 40 hours in a week while there is no male trend. The housewives had a trend of 50 hours in a week for the female sex and male sex had no numbers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
...oth male and female employment had same amount trend in unemployed and retired. There...
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Suggestion:
...ment had same amount trend in unemployed and retired. There is no trend in the gr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mployed and housewives. Male experienced an upward trend in full-time employed, u...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a downward trend. On the one hand, in the full-time employed male around 4...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne hand, in the full-time employed male around 43 hour had upper hand than fema...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
... the full-time employed male around 43 hour had upper hand than female almost 37 h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oyed male around 43 hour had upper hand than female almost 37 hour with more tha...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...r had upper hand than female almost 37 hour with more than around 5 hour. Men had s...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
... almost 37 hour with more than around 5 hour. Men had same number of trend in unempl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he other hand, in the part-time employed female had 40 hours in a week while ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56976744186 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42418854522 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459302325581 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1521439659 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229943636282 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12657730354 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586408102315 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171614523079 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565679290318 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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