Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

One of the most topical issues in modern society is the immigrants' people where they have to communicate in an overseas language with the neighbors and it can create social and practical problems. There are those who say that speaking a foreign language for immigrants with fluency may degrade by citizens however others believe that it will not affect that much if we didn't speak a foreign language. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.

From an overall perspective, there are a wide range of reasons why people believe that the software engineers are moving towards other countries as an immigrant, and they can face difficulty in the communication as well as making friends with people of that country. Perhaps the main reason why I agree that the initial days for the immigrant can be jeopardized for their lives because they have to adjust to the language and their culture of that country. For instance, if the immigrant went shopping and they did not communicate well with shopkeepers and they have a chance to cheat with immigrants by identifying with fluency itself. Furthermore, in-office also has a chance to degrade even if he good at its work.

Despite these arguments, there is a case for the idea that it is thought by some people where they believe that the immigrants have to choose the country, and they did not have any issues like the USA and Canada. If the can manage to communicate with people and the people of that country can understand and they are well behavior also matter.

In conclusion, communication can forge a problem for immigrants is a topic that is very relevant to modern society. Overall, I would like to say that I agree with the idea that the people who went for the other countries in order to work and they may chance to treat as downgrade because of speaking a foreign language.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...that it will not affect that much if we didnt speak a foreign language. In this essay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77981651376 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59335150764 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464831804281 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3646066492 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222533458587 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884878958014 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062989300481 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148232179294 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487319132393 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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