The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food.

The bar chart reveals the information about the eating habits of fast food of Britain citizens on weekly basis as well the amount spent on a particular food.

Overall, the most consumed food for the high income and average income is a hamburger and the least preffered is pizza in low income.

Firstly, for the high income and average income, the hamburger is mostly eaten by the people, which peaked to 45 and under 35 respectively, thereafter, for high-income pizza remained on the second place with slightly less than 20, moreover, fish and chips are the least consumed with about 17 same as in the low-income category.

While in the average income category the trend for fish, chips and pizza are opposite to that of high income here pizza is less preferred as compared to fish and chips.

Furthermore, for low-income category the consumption of all the fast food are relatively low as compared to other. Here the pizza is on a negligible level of consumption with just above 5, while the hamburger on the second place with slightly under 15.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85082872928 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57354210232 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502762430939 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5108771835 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147251700367 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102265620309 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123169249415 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110570294756 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128041165012 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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