the chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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the bar chart illustrates the amount of fil...
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...s the number of rentals/sales annually. since,y-axis shows a year. according to th...
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...s the number of rentals/sales annually. since,y-axis shows a year. according to th...
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... number of rentals/sales annually. since,y-axis shows a year. according to the bar g...
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...annually. since,y-axis shows a year. according to the bar graph,highest number of film...
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...ws a year. according to the bar graph,highest number of films were rented in 2002,the...
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...ws a year. according to the bar graph,highest number of films were rented in 2002,the...
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...2,the amount was around 1,85,000.however,it constantly decreased till 2011 with 650...
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...ide,45000 DVDs sold in 2002.what is more,this amount was gradually raised to 110000,1...
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...0000 in 2003,2004 and 2005 respectively.Furthermore,in 2006,the sales of VHS became zero an...
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...3,2004 and 2005 respectively.Furthermore,in 2006,the sales of VHS became zero and r...
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... replaced by Blu-ray format in 2007. the sales of DVDs were at peak with around ...
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...ales of Blu-ray was increased gradually.After that the sales in DVD and rentals was d...
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Suggestion: , sales
...0 and 70000 in 2008 respectively.however,sales of Blu-ray films were rose,in 2011 the ...
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...however,sales of Blu-ray films were rose,in 2011 the amount was nearly 30. To su...
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...1 the amount was nearly 30. To sum up,sales of rentals and VHS films were slowly de...
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... VHS films were slowly decreased.whereas,sales of DVD films continuously raised till 2...
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...DVD films continuously raised till 2007.Afterwards,VHS replaced by blu-ray.In addition,in ...
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...continuously raised till 2007.Afterwards,VHS replaced by blu-ray.In addition,in 2011...
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...2007.Afterwards,VHS replaced by blu-ray.In addition,in 2011 sales of DVDs went dow...
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...ards,VHS replaced by blu-ray.In addition,in 2011 sales of DVDs went down.whereas, s...
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...ereas, sales of bluray films increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, whereas, in addition, to sum up, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63819095477 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.03286916928 2.65546596893 152% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532663316583 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.82522964 43.030603864 402% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.4 112.824112599 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 5.23603664747 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159425824675 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115813733086 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721988224337 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124308049057 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616518057976 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 13.2329268293 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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