The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The visual given presents the yearly amount of movies rented or sold from a particular shop between 2002 and 2011. It can be seen that number of rentals, that was the biggest at the beginning, significantly dropped throughout the years. On the other side, dvd sales reached its peak in 2007, and had remained as a top-selling item.
Firstly, number of vhs sales that were slightly more than 80,000 dropped to only 10.000 in 2005. Moreover, after that there were no any more recorded sales for vhs. However, the blue-ray format movies sale started in 2007 with about one thousand sales and increased to 15.000 sales in 2011. Furthermore, from the peak of 180,000 blue-ray rentals that were in 2002, slightly below 60.000 of the rentals were done in 2011.
Dvd movie sales was the only branch that had grown up to 200.000 sales in 2007, the biggest ever, and had only slightly dropped to 180.000 in 2011.
To sum up, it is obvious that technology improvements ejected VHS from the market and had reduced number of total movies rented. As a result, number of dvd sales and blue-ray increased.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...n 2005. Moreover, after that there were no any more recorded sales for vhs. Howeve...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...re recorded sales for vhs. However, the blue-ray format movies sale started in 2007 with...
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Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
.... Furthermore, from the peak of 180,000 blue-ray rentals that were in 2002, slightly bel...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...d. As a result, number of dvd sales and blue-ray increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76315789474 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35105327961 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563157894737 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5319814035 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171898510259 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746444850035 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445386056367 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103893831759 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332180521706 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.