the chart below shows the annual pay ( thousand of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
The figure demonstrates the salary of physicians and other workers of seven different countries in 2004.
Overall, the United states had the highest annual pay for both doctors and other workers. On the other hand ,while physicians of Finland had the lowest pay, the lowest salaries for other workers were in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany with same amount in year.
Although physicians had the highest paid job, the difference of this annual pay was significantly diverse between these 7 countries. Firstly, the US doctors received 120 thousand of dollar per year claiming the first position among all countries. Secondly, France and Switzerland came in second place with 70 thousand dollar annual salary and finally the lowest annual salary, which was 50 thousand dollar per year, was in Finland.
The difference of annual salary of other workers was not significant. These employees were paid as low as 20 thousand dollar per year in Italy, Germany, and Czech Republic .While the highest income for other works was 40 thousand dollar, the second highest with no considerable difference was 30 thousand dollar for France.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46703296703 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74003998219 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0924018977 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.0 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366037915863 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214133942552 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786405285194 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235029616494 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187760729124 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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