3. Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Variations between nations have become less significant each year. The way people eat or their fashion, advertising, brands, and TV channels are becoming more similar. In my personal view, these developments have their own merits and drawback.
The primary advantage of globalization that people can have better communication. People who live in different countries have various dialects and languages. Therefore, establishing a effective interaction can be challenging for them. To address this problem globalization has played an essential role. It introduced English as an universally accepted language that every citizen can take advantage of and make proper connections.
Another advantage of these similarities is that the gulf between rich and poor can become less evident. As a result of difficult competition between brands, they are offering discounts and rebates on a regular basis. This may help underprivileged people to provide themselves with the same fashion accessories and equipment as the wealthy residents do.
Despite the advantages that globalization can provide, there is an important drawback regarding cultural diversity. People’s heritage and culture has developed over millennia, and it has been passed down from their ancestors. Each part of the world has an unique way of living that represent their cultural heritage. The effect of globalization has led to reducing these diversities internationally. If this trend continues, it will destroy many cultures in the long run.
In conclusion, although globalization can adversely influence our cultural diversity, I believe that merits are far more prominent. Not only can it positively impact our communications, but it could also benefit underprivileged people to achieve a sense of self-importance, by giving them the power to purchase various items.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...r ancestors. Each part of the world has an unique way of living that represent th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99267399267 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4089597516 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9691099636 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213078489989 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725469769752 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652552742462 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114905271573 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705586830314 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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