Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Globalization has brought equal trends among people around the world. People from different nations share the same taste in what to wear, or eat, and the media is also broadcasting the same content. This changes have both advantages and drawbacks.
Immigration has become easier owing to this global village since many products are sold globally, and TV channels in destination are the same as that of homeland. Immigrants, therefore, may not find it difficult to shop, and do not become homesick as a result of familiar TV programs.
Easy access to high quality products is another merit of globalization since almost all brand companies have a chain store in every country. For example, a swimmer from Iran can easily purchase the highest quality of swim suites from NIKE stores in Tehran.
Forgetting about traditions, however, is one of the disadvantages. Each nation has its own unique culture which is represented in their poems and myth. Younger generations are now watching TV programs which has no content about their traditions. For instance, Iranian children are now more familiar with Disney characters than Rostam and Sohrab in famous Iranian book named Shaahnaame.
Local businesses are also at risk of bankruptcy as a result of more sales in globally famous brands. Most products’ manufacture are now dominated by one or two international company which has resulted in less profit for small factories in developing countries. For example, Melli shoes used to be popular among Iranians, and it is predicted, within a few decades, there will have been no items produced by this company.
In conclusion, although the global village has made moving abroad , shopping famous brands easier, it also had some adverse effects on local cultures and markets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...brought equal trends among people around the world. People from different nations...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he global village has made moving abroad , shopping famous brands easier, it also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24561403509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76966559064 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659649122807 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8254742747 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163312585432 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499654475235 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565574943121 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805996569307 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805910021145 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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