The chart below shows the annual pay thousands of US dollars for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004 Given is a bar chart illustrating the income per year for doctors and other employees in seven different nations in 2004 Overall a more d

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The chart below shows the annual pay ( thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
Given is a bar chart illustrating the income per year for doctors and other employees in seven different nations in 2004.

Overall, a more detailed look at the picture reveals that whenever among seven areas, the salary of doctor was higher than any kinds of work, and this gap was extreme significant. In addition, Americans had the most remarkable payment for all jobs.

To commence with, 120,000 US dollars was the given payment for doctors in US, that was triple than other types of occupation. Likewise, the annual salary for doctors was about three fold than that for other workers in Germany, Czech, and Italy. While the former was 60,000 US dollars or more, the latter was exactly 20,000 US dollars, ranking as the lowest point.

Doctors in Switze and France were paid the same income, around 70,000 US dollars. However, the pay for others in Switzer was 10,000 US dollar bigger than that in France, 30,000 US dollars. Finally, Filand paid for doctors less than any these countries, approximately 50,000 US dollars, and the salary of other employees was just more than 20,000 US dollars.

Given is a bar chart illustrating the income per year for doctors and other employees in seven different nations in 2004.

Overall, a more detailed look at the picture reveals that whenever among seven areas, the salary of doctor was higher than any kinds of work, and this gap was extreme significant. In addition, Americans had the most remarkable payment for all jobs.

To commence with, 120,000 US dollars was the given payment for doctors in US, that was triple than other types of occupation. Likewise, the annual salary for doctors was about three fold than that for other workers in Germany, Czech, and Italy. While the former was 60,000 US dollars or more, the latter was exactly 20,000 US dollars, ranking as the lowest point.

Doctors in Switze and France were paid the same income, around 70,000 US dollars. However, the pay for others in Switzer was 10,000 US dollar bigger than that in France, 30,000 US dollars. Finally, Filand paid for doctors less than any these countries, approximately 50,000 US dollars, and the salary of other employees was just more than 20,000 US dollars.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, likewise, look, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99462365591 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32582037091 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7280335465 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365153563024 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193317294294 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199350613645 0.0843802449381 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308331647947 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.249061501892 0.0819641961636 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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