The given line graph delineates the data regarding the changes in various regions of crime, Burglary, Car theft and Robbery Manchester city over a decade.
Overall, it can be seen that, the highest change was seen in the burglary area whereas, other two regions Car theft and robbery was also showing fluctuations.
It is crystal clear that, in 2003, near about 510 robbery was done which was increase and reached approximately 900. However, between 2005 and 2009, the crime of robbery declined slightly. While, in 2009 it was also gone up and after that in 2010 it was showing downward trend and reached where it start in 2003.
Moving further, the crime of car theft was begun at around 2025 in 2003 which was decrease and accounted at 2000 in 2006. Meanwhile, from 2006 to 2012, the crime in car theft was fluctuated and reached near about 2575. On the contrary, in 2003 crime of burglary was start at around 3500 and comprised 3575 in 2004. A dramatic declined was observed in the crime of burglary between 2004 and 2008. After 2008 it was showing upward trend and reached about 1450 in 2012.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... decrease and accounted at 2000 in 2006.Meanwhile, from 2006 to 2012, the crime in car th...
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...006 to 2012, the crime in car theft was fluctuate and reached near about 2575.On the cont...
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...s fluctuate and reached near about 2575.On the contrary, in 2003 the burglary c...
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... about 2575.On the contrary, in 2003 the burglary crime was start at around 3500 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, regarding, so, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7671957672 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3662095 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529100529101 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8231247677 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0401491504162 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251866361852 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288550194532 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315422113952 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275159314563 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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