The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in the manchester city center from 2003 to 2012

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The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in the manchester city center from 2003 to 2012

The line chart gives information about how the tendency of three kinds of lawbreaking changed in Manchester from 2003 to 2012.

Overall, While there was a significant downward trend in the number of Burglaries, those automobile thefts and robberies showed slight fluctuations in the given time.

Despite being the most alarming issue in Manchester, the number of burglars in this city plummeted to hit a trough at almost 1,000 cases before a marginal rise from under 3,500 cases to a peak at over that starting point in 2004. From 2008 onwards, it increased negligibly to 1,500 and kept hovering around this level.

Between 2003 and 2009, the figure for car thefts was volatile at a tiny extent, with a range from 2,000 to 2,500 cases. In the next few years, this data was seen upward albeit fitfully, reaching its peak at under 3,000 cases. In sharp contrast, robbery proved to be the least concerning problem in the chart with the data being erratic between 500 and 1,000. The peak of it was recorded only in 2,005.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84659090909 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43488946879 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5204752987 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156656530278 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684295105484 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979614396075 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115700684719 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119020823119 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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