The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000.

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The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000.

The bar chart shows the percentage of world illiteracy among genders in six different regions in 2000.
It is clear that the rates of illiteracy among women was by far the highest in South Asia,where more than half of all females was uneducated.
According to the bar chart, the most illiteracy proportion for females was in South Asia,at 55%.
The figures for Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa were not quite as high as that,at approximately half. The rate of ignorance in East Asia /Oceania was twice as high as Latin America/Caribbean,at 20 % compared to just over 10%,followed by Developed countries,at closely 0%. When it comes to males,the figure for Sub-Subsaharan Africa,Arab States and South Asia stood at around 30%. The proportion of uneducated men in Latin America/Caribbean was almost as high as East Asia/Oceania,at nearly 10%. Next come Developed countries where the figure reached to a low of 0%.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.322404371585 0.268076937826 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.0819672131148 0.116061578633 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0710382513661 0.0759168565197 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0710382513661 0.0366838410393 194% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0109289617486 0.0131127313244 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.169398907104 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.016393442623 0.0379272487307 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.3007002624 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218579234973 0.0210936926555 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765027322404 0.0948980150116 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016393442623 0.00967000014798 170% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 945.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.9 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3 5.90752243213 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306666666667 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246666666667 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18 0.171178102325 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166666666667 0.112407865282 148% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3007002624 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.546246751206 118% => OK
Word variations: 60.0641241214 49.3433353143 122% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 18.75 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8107443266 42.9750493124 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 135.714022679 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.689975730869 36% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.48048780488 811% => OK
Readability: 43.4166666667 47.7609492067 91% => OK
Elegance: 3.1 2.94281807926 105% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266883834417 0.418131533498 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136395666976 0.181151798455 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0793419676618 0.0850326197045 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.71308839644 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.245651002498 0.157042692854 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137846022293 0.228904883108 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736590984505 0.108899403657 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27655967145 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0230822849583 0.0812612215331 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203774763202 0.316326947829 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491983351856 0.0921553760075 53% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.14146341463 438% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 0.956097560976 523% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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