The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features

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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features.

The line graph demonstrates the proportion of teenagers in UK Who are vegetarian over the given period.
It is clear that the percentage of UK juveniles following a vegetarian diet rose significantly over the next decades.
According to the line graph,the percentage of UK adolescents who are vegetarian stood at 0% in 1960.
After increasing substantially from 1960 to 1980, the figure for 1990 decreased moderately,reaching to just over 5%. The percentage ofUK adolescents who follow a vegetarian diet declined considerably,despite some fluctuations,with...

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Average: 8.3 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... are vegetarian over the given period. It is clear that the percentage of UK ju...
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...o are vegetarian stood at 0% in 1960. After increasing substantially from 1960...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233333333333 0.268076937826 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.146666666667 0.116061578633 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0666666666667 0.0759168565197 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.06 0.0366838410393 164% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00666666666667 0.0131127313244 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146666666667 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.06 0.0379272487307 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.67012567703 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466666666667 0.0210936926555 221% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12 0.0948980150116 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133333333333 0.00967000014798 138% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 856.0 1161.00487805 74% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.9 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.58461538462 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73763899035 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323076923077 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.247514529752 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246153846154 0.171178102325 144% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.215384615385 0.112407865282 192% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.67012567703 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.546246751206 114% => OK
Word variations: 52.4777977233 49.3433353143 106% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6666666667 23.0094962315 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2128541491 42.9750493124 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.666666667 135.714022679 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.0094962315 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => OK
Readability: 48.5897435897 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.0625 2.94281807926 70% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47896670211 0.418131533498 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.177080621139 0.181151798455 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0452927087324 0.0850326197045 53% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.821341073233 0.706616315825 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193170509686 0.157042692854 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301469036772 0.228904883108 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115231269419 0.108899403657 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313541091197 0.367819155151 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0446118183508 0.0812612215331 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37391446748 0.316326947829 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480424707902 0.0921553760075 52% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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