The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland
The line indicates the percentage of demographic trends in Scotland between 1940 and 2020.
It is clear that the proportion of population growth decreased significantly among the given demographic trends.
According to the line graph,in 1940 the rate of population growth was at almost 1%. The figures for birth rate and death rate were higher,at approximately 1.5% and only2.5% respectively.
After plummetting slightly in 1944,the percentage of population growth increased markedly to 0.5% in 1954 before reaching a low of only 0% over the next given period. When it comes to death rate,the figure plunged to 0.5% in 1995. This was followed by a period of stability as the rate of death hovered around 0.5% by the end of the period. The share of birth,despite some fluctuations, fell to just over 1% in 1960 before dropping to 0.5% over the period shown.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nds in Scotland between 1940 and 2020. It is clear that the proportion of popul...
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...mately 1.5% and only2.5% respectively. After plummetting slightly in 1944,the p...
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...he end of the period. The share of birth,despite some fluctuations, fell to just over 1%...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264705882353 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.117647058824 0.116061578633 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0294117647059 0.0759168565197 39% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0470588235294 0.0366838410393 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0117647058824 0.0131127313244 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.182352941176 0.155750635184 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0588235294118 0.0379272487307 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92147443841 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352941176471 0.0210936926555 167% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111764705882 0.0948980150116 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00588235294118 0.00967000014798 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 885.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.9 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2323943662 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73763899035 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345070422535 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260563380282 0.247514529752 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211267605634 0.171178102325 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140845070423 0.112407865282 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92147443841 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.546246751206 110% => OK
Word variations: 50.2965027873 49.3433353143 102% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1555389755 42.9750493124 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 135.714022679 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.689975730869 36% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => OK
Readability: 43.8063380282 47.7609492067 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.86666666667 2.94281807926 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327592461989 0.418131533498 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142926989013 0.181151798455 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0594596270591 0.0850326197045 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.746235879057 0.706616315825 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165425346099 0.157042692854 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177143275695 0.228904883108 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101249938679 0.108899403657 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274277765516 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.075190169899 0.0812612215331 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242613609339 0.316326947829 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103571202902 0.0921553760075 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.