The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

Submitted by Monica1 on Tue, 09/20/2016 - 00:35

The chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five consumer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Overall, the UK spent more money on consumer goods than France in the period given. Both the British and the French spent most of their money on cars whereas the least amount of money was spent on perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France. Furthermore, the most significant difference in expenditure between the two countries was on cameras.
In terms of cars, people in the UK spent about 450,000 on this as opposed to the French who spent 400,000. Similarly, the British spent more money on books than the French (around 400,000 and 300,000 respectively). In the UK, expenditure on cameras (just over 350,000) was over double that of France, which was only 150,000.
On the other hand, the amount spent on the remaining goods was higher in France. Above 350,000 was spent by the French on computers which was slightly more than the British who spent exactly 350,000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for 200,000 of expenditure in France but under 150,000 in the UK.

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Average: 9.1 (3 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'similarly', 'whereas', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248888888889 0.268076937826 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.106666666667 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0666666666667 0.0759168565197 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0488888888889 0.0366838410393 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00444444444444 0.0131127313244 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.2 0.155750635184 128% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0379272487307 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43075972669 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00888888888889 0.0210936926555 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106666666667 0.0948980150116 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0222222222222 0.00967000014798 230% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1187.0 1161.00487805 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.9 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81862745098 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245098039216 0.247514529752 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127450980392 0.171178102325 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.078431372549 0.112407865282 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43075972669 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46568627451 0.546246751206 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.6066440115 49.3433353143 80% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5454545455 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7492760378 42.9750493124 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 135.714022679 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.689975730869 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 43.055258467 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 3.05555555556 2.94281807926 104% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475307278657 0.418131533498 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.17902900457 0.181151798455 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0959735811451 0.0850326197045 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.697356663101 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130368409133 0.157042692854 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263430569803 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116360623904 0.108899403657 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.59543669503 0.367819155151 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0646226347079 0.0812612215331 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372520291396 0.316326947829 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774019345919 0.0921553760075 84% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 3.02926829268 264% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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