The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by hardik_21 on Sun, 12/30/2018 - 09:07

The pie chart illustrates national expenditure in different sector by the United Arab Emirates in 2000.
overall, Government released 300 million AED budget in 2000. Their mainly focused on social security, Health and personal social services, and Education while transportation facility on lower priority.
As is seen in chart, Government spent exactly 100 billion on to improve social security of citizens which was almost double than second highest spent (53%) on health and personal social services. on same year, Government also funded Education sector adequately by 35 billion.
On the lower side, government spent only 22 billion on Defence which was exactly 1 billion less compare to paid debit interest (23%) and other expenditure(23%). Housing Heritage and Environment got 15 million which was only 2% lower than Law and Order (17%) and 2% higher than Industry , Agriculture and employment (13%). Surprisingly, only 9 billion was spent to update transportation facility.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48666666667 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91893004796 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0650571397 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138123226946 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697231700941 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491725895684 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970476113913 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390419941043 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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