Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed while other believe action can be taken to bring about changes.
Intensive developments are seriously damaging inhabitants especially animals and greenery around us since last few decades. Some people accept that this difficult condition cannot be controlled but some experts say, It is not too late, It can be under control by taking significant steps. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both views and give my opinion as well.
First of all, overpopulation is the root cause of this situation. deforestation for flourishing urbanization to provide indispensable lifestyle and facilities to all citizens is harmful to forest animal species to unbalance ecosystem. For example, World environment research organization said, there are almost 35 types of animal species to end of their appearance. Additionally, Nowadays, Technology equipment like mobile phone, televisions are an integral part of the lifestyle. we can not imagine someone's life without a mobile phone for few hours but It is an ugly truth that the radio frequency used in mobile technology and other wireless communication can damage brain cells enormously especially in animals. As we can not stop or restrict such development or technology revolutions, some people believe that it is very difficult to change.
Besides, Imposing strong rules surely can give some relief. lots of people are hunting the small animals for their business. For example, People are killing tigers or leopard for their skin which are used to make jackets or other apparel items. The government must ban this kind of activities and provide ample protection to these lives in centuries. Moreover, the government should limit the migration of the people to cites by providing top-level transportation facilities and ample earing opportunities to their village or small towns which helps to cut the deforestation.
To sum up, of course, development is the necessity with the time but we should respect our ecosystem as well. I believe that we need very strict rules aginst killing the animals and cutting plants or tree without any strong reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, kind of, of course, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38125 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98652573026 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6032698015 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199808769024 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568142699896 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534818315356 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112100606192 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502418285405 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.